The reason why writers should possess a paper shredder

Review by Paul Nelson

Glyn Williams (Ben) & Isobel Pravda (Claire)


A GOOD argument in favour of writers possessing a paper shredder is the script of the show at the New End in Hampstead. It is a script Casey Robinson would sue over, he assuming that someone has been through his wastebasket, and if anyone has seen the film Now Voyager, for which Robinson wrote the screenplay, they will know exactly what I mean.

The play with a female leading character, instead of a young man, would be a weepy and would have been bought up by Warner Brothers or any of the major studios in the forties if they hadn't already done it.

As it is, it deals with Obsessive Compulsive Disorder* (OCD) which is suspiciously like the condition the late Howard Hughes had, although in this case the sufferer isn't exactly walking about on Kleenex everywhere.

The plot of Commanding Voices, instead of having the repressed Charlotte Vale (Bette Davis beautifully carving little boxes) has Ben Davenport (beautifully painting pictures).

The play further imitates the 1942 movie by substituting the tyrant mother (Gladys Cooper) for the tyrant father Edward Davenport. The family doctor, down to earth George Bradley, is an amalgam of Dr Jaquith (clever Claude Rains in the movie) and Sister Kenny. However, the similarity between it and other films doesn't end there. This load of tosh really is the result of discovering the mother lode of discarded old Hollywood scripts and revamping of them.

Ben Davenport is a very talented fine artist; he can handle portraiture or animal studies with equal talent and aplomb. He has an ardent desire to study art and has applied to join the Slade. His father Edward has other ideas.

He is a Member of Parliament, an academic who has forsworn Oxford in the hope that he will become an Education Minister. He wants his son to go to Oxford and study politics and economics, something the boy is loth to do. Ben's mother Helen is a talented classical pianist and she has forsworn a musical career for her marriage to Edward. Ben having been accepted by the Slade forswears his artistic career and obeys his father.

Family doctor and friend, Good Old George has forsworn his practice due to retirement, is a widower and now lives in bucolic bliss in the country. Up at Oxford Young Ben meets Claire, a French charmer who is studying for her finals. Claire's parents understand her so she hasn't forsworn anything. She is also a talented artist and the two become an item.

During a long and predictable labyrinth of play plotting, Edward doesn't get the job but is given a substitute in Health. Ben has a nervous breakdown due to OCD, Claire leaves him and returns to France and Ben is put to a particularly unsympathetic psychiatrist, Dr Henry Grubshaw, specialising in OCD, but one who, it transpires, isn't too well himself, so Ben shows no progress.
From here, the plot becomes more convoluted.

Edward has a heart attack, Helen picks up her career again and goes on a blindingly successful series of concert tours, and decides, between tours, that enough is enough. Ben should be taken away from Grubshaw and good old George should be given a chance.

Good old George with his folksy garden herb cures and down to earth good old fashioned ideals, has a go at curing the psychiatrist of arthritis, curing Edward, and succeeds in curing Ben. There is a dark hint however that Ben's illness could recur.

Claire returns from France all shining eyes, the romance having started again. Edward and Helen mutually realise what they have been missing. Edward is offered the original job he craved but decides he wants to finish the one he is on, and just before that triggers off another bout of forswearing, Ben returns to his art studies with a hint the Slade may reconsider him. The play ends with a tableau, the parents are being painted as a group by the son.

In this improbable fairy story everything happens for the good of everybody. For me, sadly, the last straw was the omission of Christmas, then they could all have given each other presents.

Starting with unreal dialogue such as one has never heard in life, and with no real play ever happening - a chain of events constitutes a soap opera not a play - the evening drags on and on. The group sitting behind me became increasingly restless as the evening unfolded, with suppressed laughter in the wrong places.

Once again though, the saintly actors resolutely strive; it has a magnificent cast who deserve better.

You really do believe in the stiff-necked priggish Edward, to the point where you want to punch him. Helen is a genuine sympathetic and pleasant character after her initial scenes where the dialogue is wonky. Friendly old George presents a gentlemanly nurse and all round good egg and Claire is played with a great deal more charm than the part warrants.

Piers, the man from the ministry and Grubshaw the psychiatrist struggle with their cardboard cutouts but manage to get admirable amounts of reality and fun from the preposterous scenes with which they are involved. Finally, the hero of all this, Ben, is played with such an amazing amount of talent that I fully expect the actor to be offered all sorts of golden opportunities before this calamity reaches the second week of its scheduled run.

It's worth seeing for Ben alone but when and if you do, try hard not to prompt as familiar line after familiar line is hauled out, particularly in the unnecessary closing scenes of what should be referred to as an event, for play it is not.

Commanding Voices by Robert Eddison. Directed by Richard Howard, Designed by Alex Marker, Lighting Design by James Whiteside, and Incidental music by Jeremy Nicholas. WITH Glyn Williams (Ben Davenport), Katherine Hogarth (Helen Davenport), Jeremy Child (Edward Davenport MP), John Burgess (Dr George Bradley), James Puddephatt (Piers Murray), Isobel Pravda (Claire Gaultier), and Gregory Cox (Dr Henry Grubshaw). Presented by New End Theatre at the New End Theatre, 27 New End, Hampstead London NW3. 020 7794 0022.

*An illness whose common symptoms are: obsessions with dirt, germs and contamination; fear of acting on violent impulses; unreasonable fear of harming others; abhorrent blasphemous or sexual thoughts; inordinate concern with order, arrangement or symmetry; and the inability to discard useless or worn out possessions.

Picture two shows, from left to right: Jeremy Child (Edward); James Puddephatt (Piers Murray); Katherine Hogarth (Helen); & John Burgess (Dr George Bradley)